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How time can control us all
How hard it is to understand, that nothing lasts forever
To see that one day it will get to you
And that the time has come to say goodbye

As those words reach me
Sadness crawls up inside of me
I cling on to the thought of you
1:AM forever…

Proud that you have seen my glory
And that you have shared it with me
This is what makes me realize
That not even the strongest is immortal

And slowly it sinks in
The cold, hard and unacceptable truth
You’re not here anymore
1:AM forever…

With a deck of cards in your hand
You’re rocking it in heaven now
And the memory of you is all that remains
But that will last forever

To watch you slip away
Reality hits me in the face
As tears are falling from my eyes
1:AM forever

The path of life goes on
But it doesn’t go along the easy way
Remember that you’re here, in my heart
And that the memory of you won’t ever fade away

I hope you will look down on me
And that you’re proud of what I have become
Proud of what I will be
And that you will always be here with me

1:AM forever…
©2009 ~LuffieJJ
:iconluffiejj:

Author's Comments

†My Grandmother†

She passed away little over a week ago..
To make a long story short: I was graduated, she was here that night..The next morning she had a brain aneurysm (or something like that)
She was paralyzed and breathing was the only thing she could do for herself..

Sounds harsh to say, but she is better off now..

Title: It was about 1:AM when I heard that she died..
Lostprophets's song 4:AM forever helped me through this..

P.S.
I don't want your pity with words like: I'm sorry, that won't help me, doesnt matter how nice youre trying to be..

Hope you're rocking it in heaven now grandma..:heart:

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:iconev78cry:
very powerful and emotional poem, wonderful work :huggle:

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...what if I'm the kindest demon,
something you may not believe in...
:iconcelestial-poet:
Gecondoleerd :( :hug: Ik weet niet precies hoe het voelt, maar uit het gedicht kan ik wel lezen dat het je pijn heeft gedaan. Dat heb je er goed in verwerkt. Ik herkende ook meteen wat dingetjes idd uit het nummer van Lost Prophets, maar je hebt je jouw eigen draai aan gegeven, goed zo. Veel sterkte verder :hug:

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:iconluffiejj:
Kijk dat is een waardevolle comment!
Dankjewel :)

Jaa t doet gewoon pijn om iemand waarvan je houd te verliezen...En ja twas gewoon raar...donderdag avond was ze hier, en vrijdag ochtend was ze ene kasplantje..

Dat is gewoon heel bizar dat dat zo snel kan gebeuren..

Maar dankjewel :)

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All the make-up cannot hide the fact..
That you're gone and you're never coming back...
:iconluffiejj:
Thank you:)

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All the make-up cannot hide the fact..
That you're gone and you're never coming back...
:iconluffiejj:
Thnx :)

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All the make-up cannot hide the fact..
That you're gone and you're never coming back...
:iconev78cry:
welcome :hug:

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...what if I'm the kindest demon,
something you may not believe in...
:iconseetherfan2:
Aww, sad and good at the same time! :cuddle:

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If you didn't have so much stuff, you wouldn't need a house. ~George Carlin
:icongodnessimaginary:
So emotional and really nice =)

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I: "If the world is going to end seven days before it happens?"
M: "I think I'd go mad-... I'd rape all the women I'll meet..."


Note to self - avoid Bellamy if world comes to end naaahhh...

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